First part of filming- Scarlets Scenes

For my scences we had to film at night as the scence is meant to be late in the day. As it is dark in my room and the only light we had was my room light, the camera is grainy and hard to see a lot of detail. When filming this first time the camera to shaky to use so we have to redo the filming. Also when the killer walks out you cant even see him, so we need to add more light to this.
So what to do next time?
Well, to make the scene more interesting we need to add more cuts so we can kept the audeince interesting and it keeps moving.
So with me pressing play on the docking station we added more cuts instead of a slow zoom to the phone, this keeps the audeince interested and knowing my surrounding of the room.
Also as we couldn't get the shadow of the killer by my door, as I knew it was going to be a problem, we changed it so there was a hand on the door, so there still a change of fear.
Also with the phone ringing I am going to do more shots around the phone so its not just a long 5 seconds of the phone ringing in the same place.
Not only that but when I have been killed we have going to be having close ups and mid shots of me dead on the bed, this is to give surpise to the audeince that I died, also needing to re film it as the camera was to shakey first time. And finally with the killers scene walking out we are going to light up the hall way so you can see him walking out, as the first time we could see him at all.
Also costumes was changed, in the costume ideas we said I be wearing an orange vest top and black socks, when filming we changed the costumes so my orange vest wasn't used because I used a white vest top to die in. And I used wore blue socks when filming.
Hopefully from changing these things, the film will be more interesting with lots of different cuts and angles in the film.

These pictures are from the filming-

This is the white shirt we used for the filming, also next to it is the black leggings I used to wear in the scene.

In this photo we have added the fake blood to the costume, this is what im going to die in.

This is how bright my room was when we filmed first time-

This is the scene I die in, we have changed the bed covers so there is blood on them, we changed it it white so the blood will show up more.